Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Class - 3/30/11


 
1.     Roll/Study Recruitment (Jeannie)

2.     Questions on Draft 2.1?

3.     Discussion of Arguments and Thesis Statements

4.     Integrating Sources Exercise - Textbook Examples (examples of assignment and practice on example draft 2.1)

5.    Revision process - begin revisions now

5.     Discuss BA 7 –

Reading

Textbook: Chapter 8 p. 256-285.

Assignment: Brief Assignment 7

Objective: To practice integrating quotations and evaluating sources

Description: To complete this assignment, choose three passages (individual sentences or groups of sentences—not necessarily full paragraphs) from your 2.1 draft that cite sources. First, in paragraph form, evaluate how well these sources are integrated into your text. For example, do the sources as currently used help strengthen your argument? What role do they play? Do they help define a concept, explain or rebut a counterargument? Have you used too many sources, or used a few sources excessively? (See section 15f of your handbook for an example of excessive source use)




Next, discuss how you might integrate these sources in a manner that is more effective to your readers. For example, your readers should understand the purpose of the source material. That is, does the source help define, explain, inform, or highlight an idea? If so, consider using phrases such as “The author defines . . .” or “This article reveals…” A more complete list of these signal phrases is available in the green box at the bottom of section 15b in your handbook.




Finally, revise the passages based on your evaluations of the originals and discuss how these changes enhance the quality of your source integration. Be sure to label the original and the revised passages as original or revised.




Scoring Guide:

 C1: Issue Identification and Focus

Has the student made significant revisions? In other words, did he or she do more than change the signal phrase?

C3: Sources and Evidence

Have the student’s integrations improved his/her use of sources and evidence?  Make connections to the handbook. Refer writers to specific sections to show them how to revise and how to talk about revision. The green boxes are especially helpful in this respect.

C5: Own Perspective

Does the student discuss, specifically, the changes and the impact of those changes? Students often want to write something along the lines of " . . . I incorporated more direct quotes, so now my argument is stronger." They need to discuss why a change is more effective. Students need to understand the analysis is a critical element of this assignment.

C6: Conclusion

Does the student provide an evaluative statement which identifies the stronger passage and gives good reasons for this identification?

C7: Communication

Has the student clearly labeled all of the elements of the assignment (original passage, revised passage, and analysis)?  How effective is the student’s communication at the sentence level, especially in the revised passages and the analysis?




In addition to the above criteria, you should

Note if the writer has included all the elements of the assignment: original paragraph, revision, and evaluation.
Verify that the writer has made the changes that he or she claims to have made.
HW:

1. BA 7 by Monday at 11:59 p.m.

2. Bring two printed copies of revised draft 2.1 to class next week (homework grade - 100 points each)

Tuesday, March 22, 2011

Class - Wed., 3/23/11

1.       Roll
2.       Questions on BA6?
3.       Arrangement: Review Chap. 7 points – pgs. 201 – 227; Pg. 218 includes many considerations
- Exordium (introduction)
- Narrative  (narration of the case – statement of the case) – includes all points
- Point/proof A (topic sentence)
- Point/proof B (topic sentence)
- Point/proof C (topic sentence)
- Point/proof D (topic sentence)
- Point/proof E (topic sentence)
- Refutation (rebuttal)
-  Peroration (conclusion)
- List of working sources (2 – 6)
4.   Review Draft 2.1 Assignment -
Textbook: Read Chapter 8 pp. 239-255 on STYLE
Textbook: Review Student Example – Jarred Riley, Pg. 695
Assignment: 2.1: Researched Argument
Objective: To practice locating and evaluating sources and then integrating those sources into a researched argument.
 Description: To complete this assignment, write an argument using the strategies and structures described in your textbook and the handbook. The argument should have an identifiable thesis, lines of argument, logical support, ethical and emotional appeals (if applicable), and consideration of alternative views. 
You should use 6 sources from the TTU library or library databases as specified by your instructor for this assignment. Your essay should be 1500 words in length, not including the list of works cited. Please use MLA format (see Ch. 18 of your handbook) for in-text citations and your list of works cited.

Scoring Guide:
C1—Issue Identification and Focus
Has the student focused his or her argument on a narrow topic?  Is the essay argumentative rather than informative?
C2—Context and Assumptions
Has the student considered the contexts of the articles which he or she quotes?  Has the student discussed any assumptions which he or she makes about the topic as well as the assumptions which the articles make?
C3—Sources and Evidence
Has the student presented sources effectively to support his or her points?  Are the sources scholarly?  Has the student cited these sources correctly?  Is the Works Cited list formatted correctly? Has the student cited all of the sources listed in the Works Cited?
C4—Diverse Perspectives
Does the student consider the counterargument fairly and carefully?  Do the articles which the student cites in the counterargument support the counterargument and not the argument?  Sometimes, students will borrow a summary of the counterargument from a source that they have been using to support their own lines of argument.
C5—Own Perspective
Has the student clearly stated an arguable thesis statement?  Do the lines of argument provide adequate support for this thesis statement, and is it clear how they support it? 
C6—Conclusion
Does the student summarize the main points the student has made?  Does the conclusion restate the thesis statement?  How effective is the conclusion rhetorically?
C7—Communication
Is the essay clearly organized and easy to follow?  Can you tell which paragraphs are lines of argument?  Is it clear how every paragraph helps to develop the thesis statement?  How effective is the student’s writing at the sentence level?
5. Review Databases and Return Ch. 5 Quizzes
7. Return Quizzes – quizzes graded on curve, A - F
8. Library Assignment: By the end of class, please email me an outline of your Draft 2.1 paper. This is a classwork credit grade (100 points). Include the following in the TEXT OF AN EMAIL to erin.trauth@ttu.edu:
- Exordium (introduction)
- Narrative  (narration of the case – statement of the case) – includes all points
- Point/proof A (topic sentence)
- Point/proof B (topic sentence)
- Point/proof C (topic sentence)
- Point/proof D (topic sentence)
- Point/proof E (topic sentence)
- Refutation (rebuttal)
-  Peroration (conclusion)
- List of working sources (2 – 6)

 

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Class - Wed., March 9, 2011

Class – Wednesday, March 9, 2011
1. Roll
2. Questions on BA6? Look at pgs. 670-672 for further discussion.
3. Review Ch. 5 and 6 Readings –
·       First-year Writing Textbook: Chapter 5, pgs. 153-166
·       Chapter 6 pp.169197
Review terms:
rhetoric – Aristotle’s definition: using the available means of persuasion
ideology – coherent set of beliefs people use to understand events and the behavior of other people. Words about ideas
argument (and researched argument)
ethos – appeal to character
pathos- appeal to emotion
logos – appeal to reason
analogy – puts one hypothetical example forth for comparison to another example; professional wrestling is to athletic competition as Crossfire is to debate
metaphor – A figure of speech in which an implicit comparison is made between two unlike things that actually have something in common. “The assignment was a breeze.",
simile – uses like or as
maxims – wise sayings or proverbs
theoretical framework – structure of theories
proposition – any arguable statement put forward by a rhetor
premises- a proposition supporting or helping to support a conclusion.
commonplaces – ideas commonly believed in by members of a community
probabilities – any kind of statements that predicts something about human behavior; not as reliable as certainties; “A small weak person will not physically attack a large strong person”
logical proof - An argument based on inductive or deductive reasoning.
reasoning – “a discussion in which certain things have been lead down, and something other than these things necessarily results through them” – Aristotle; All people are mortal, I am a person, therefore I am mortal. Major, minor, conclusion – Pg 175
deductive reasoning- . A deductive argument is one in which it is impossible for the premises to be true but the conclusion false. Thus, the conclusion follows necessarily from the premises and inferences.
1. All men are mortal. (premise)
2. Socrates was a man. (premise)
3. Socrates was mortal. (conclusion)
inductive reasoning - An inductive argument is one in which the premises are supposed to support the conclusion in such a way that if the premises are true, it is improbable that the conclusion would be false. Thus, the conclusion follows probably from the premises and inferences. Here is an example:
1. Socrates was Greek. (premise)
2. Most Greeks eat fish. (premise)
3. Socrates ate fish. (conclusion)

syllogism - A syllogism or logical appeal is a kind of logical argument in which one proposition (the conclusion) is inferred from two others (the premises) of a certain form, i.e. categorical proposition.
enthymeme (EN-thuh-meme): A figure of reasoning in which one or more statements of a syllogism (a three-pronged deductive argument) is/are left out of the configuration; an abbreviated syllogism or truncated deductive argument in which one or more premises, or, the conclusion is/are omitted. There are various kinds of syllogisms and the formal treatment of them is rather technical. However, all syllogisms are similar in that they contain at least three statements -- two premises followed by a conclusion.
Ex1: - All humans are mortal. (major premise)
       - Michael is human. (minor premise)
       - Michael is mortal. (conclusion)
The syllogism above would be rendered an enthymeme simply by maintaining that "Michael is mortal because he's human" (leaving out the major premise). Or put differently, "Since all humans are mortal, Michael is therefore mortal" (leaving out the minor premise). Statements may be strategically excluded in an enthymeme because they are too obvious or because revealing them might damage the force of the argument. Yet another reason to excluded a premise or conclusion is to let the audience infer it. The idea here is that audiences who have to draw out premises or conclusions for themselves are more likely to be persuaded by the overall argument.
Ex2: - Those who study rhetoric speak eloquently. (major premise)
       - Susan studies rhetoric. (minor premise)
       - Susan speaks eloquently. (conclusion)
 understand that in an enthymeme some logical elements are assumed
Big question: How does the type of information a writer uses help identify a writer’s theoretical framework?
4. Moving forward: How do visuals work as argument and in argument?
- Examine examples
5. Assignment – BA 6 – Due Monday, 3/21/2011 at 11:59 p.m.
Reading
Textbook: Chapter 7 pp. 201235; EHandbook: Chapter 10 (Specifically the questions and the green box in section 10c of the St. Martin’s Handbook)
Assignment: Brief Assignment 6
Examples: Pg 690 – 693 in textbook
Objective: To demonstrate your ability to analyze how figures and tables work in an argument.
Description: Answer the following in a 300500 word essay.
o Read "The Politics of Cohabitation" on pg. 411-418 of First-Year Writing. Joy Van Marion uses four visuals, which are intended to provide strong support for her argument. Which visual is most strongly "anchored" in the text: Table 1, 2, 3, or 4?  In other words, which visual does Van Marion provide the most reference to in the text in using it to support her argument? How might she have better anchored the other visuals to provide stronger support that is clear to the reader, rather than a vague implication which is left up to the reader to draw for himself or herself? Be sure to support your decision with solid, logical evidence from the text.

Scoring Guide:
 The analysis of visuals for this assignment asks students to consider the types of visuals that they will encounter in academic writing and how these visuals support the text.

In this assignment, consider the following:
C1—Issue Identification and Focus
   Does the student focus on analyzing the ways visuals function in the text?  Does the student address all of the questions in the prompt? How specific are the student’s   suggestions for improvement?
C2—Context and Assumptions
Does the student consider the visual in the context of the overall argument?
C3—Sources and Evidence
    Does the student use specific evidence from the article?
C5—Own Perspective
Is the student’s opinion of the author’s use of visuals clear?
C6—Conclusion
Does the conclusion offer an evaluative statement of the visuals’ effectiveness in the article?
C7—Communication
Is the essay clearly and logically organized?  How effective is the student’s communication at the sentence level?
6. Review Draft 2.1 – Due 3/28/2011
Draft 2.1: Researched Argument
Example: pp. 695-699
Objective:
To practice locating and evaluating sources and then integrating those sources into a researched argument.


Description:
To complete this assignment, write an argument using the strategies and structures described in your textbook and the handbook. The argument should have an identifiable thesis, lines of argument, logical support, ethical and emotional appeals (if applicable), and consideration of alternative views.


You should use 6 sources from the TTU library or library databases as specified by your instructor for this assignment. Your essay should be 1500 words in length, not including the list of works cited. Please use MLA format (see Ch. 18 of your handbook) for in-text citations and your list of works cited.
Topic proposals due in Google Docs by Monday, 3/21/2011 at 11:59 p.m. for full credit

Tuesday, March 1, 2011

Class - Wed., March 2, 2011

Class Activities for Wednesday, March 2

Today’s Instructor: Jeannie Bennett

1. Roll

2. Collect Peer Review Sheet from last week

3. Chapter 5 Reading Quiz – 20 minutes

4. Crossfire clip (through about 8-minute mark): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aFQFB5YpDZE
Pg 136-137 in the textbook also discusses this clip.

A. After watching the clip, please respond to this question:
Consider John Stewart’s point about the state of argument in America today. Have you encountered any examples recently or argument that’s not really argument? How can you tell the theatrical sort of argument from the rhetorically-engaged?

B. Discuss answer with a partner

6. First-year Writing Textbook: Chapter 5 pgs. 135-153.
A. Questions/responses.
B. In groups of four, please answer the following questions:
·        What is an argument?
·        What is different between ancient and modern forms of argument?
·        What does argument look like in our society today?
·        How does one get someone else to change their mind about a topic? In other words, how does one effectively argue? Is this different when done in written form versus verbally?

7. Go over BA 5 (Due Monday, March 7 at 11:59 p.m.). You’ll want to be SURE to read what’s listed below before beginning the assignment, as the readings will guide your analysis in BA5.
Step 1 -  Read First-year Writing Textbook: Chapter 5, pgs. 153-166
Step 2 – Read Textbook: Chapter 6 pp.169197
Step 3 – Complete Brief Assignment 5: Logical Proof and Theoretical Framework
Objective:
To demonstrate your ability to analyze the effectiveness of support in an argument and how the support relates to the author's theoretical framework.
Description:
Choose one of the following articles, and in a 400-600 word essay, identify and analyze the author’s use of logical support and how the support helps frame the writer’s theoretical framework.
* “Iraq and the Democratic Peace: Who Says Democracies Don’t Fight?” (501-505)
* “The Tragedy of the Commoners: Biotechnology and its Publics” (540-547)
* “Why Marriage Today Takes More Love, Work – from Both Partners” (419-421)
Describe the author's framework.  Consider the following: What types of evidence do the authors use? How does this evidence demonstrate the authors’ ideology. Be sure to use evidence from the text itself to support your evaluations.
Length: 400 - 600 words Format: MLA style for internal citations and works cited.

 BA 5 Scoring Guide:

 C1—Issue Identification and Focus

Does the student thoroughly analyze the kinds of support used by the author and its effectiveness? Does the student analyze how the author’s support might reflect the writer’s ideology/theoretical framework?

 C2—Context and Assumptions

Does the student’s analysis show an awareness of how elements, such as background, environment, bias, and so forth can influence or shape the author’s theoretical framework?

 C3—Sources and Evidence

Does the student support his or her analysis with evidence from the text?

 C5—Own Perspective

Is the student’s voice apparent throughout the analysis? Does the student assert his or her own views?

 C6—Conclusion

How effectively does the conclusion pull the analysis together? 

 C7—Communication

Does the student communicate his or her analysis effectively?  Is the student's tone professional?  Has the student organized his or her analysis effectively?  Is the analysis relatively free of grammatical errors?